Originally Posted By: tommyad
The thing that strikes me the most here is the interesting chord choices. Some fine guitar work and vocal supporting an unusual set of lyrics. This is not your everyday type of song but one that challenges the listener to take a journey. I took the ride and enjoyed it! Good collab, Tom


Thanks for going along with Scott and I on this ride, Tom- I appreciate the positive comments.

Robert

Originally Posted By: Ian Ferrin
This is a great tune IMO. I love the overall vibe and it's really well mixed.

Super nice lyrical images.

I'm not sure about the Christian speaking in tongues image mixed in with otherwise classical pantheon imagry. But this is a very small thing. It's fine actually. I'm just wondering if you might find a stronger image?

The vocals and guitar work are good and really fit.

Nice job guys,

Ian


Ian,

Thank you for your listen and thoughtful comments - I`m especially glad you liked the mix.
I remember thinking that speaking in tongues line could be interpreted as a Christian reference, though it has meaning in many cultures... but then my research was limited to looking at the painting!

Robert