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Ever wake in the morning with a vague feeling something's wrong? https://soundcloud.com/tuigorge/somethings-wrongSomething's Wrong RD - Jazz Funk Pop Bass - RT 7429 Acoustic held Synth - RT 2275 Disco Piano - RT 2762 Brit pop Piano - RT 2495 Electric held Fiddle - RT 618 Allis | E | A | F#m7 | B7 | E Woke up this | C#m morning | F#m7 feeling somethings | B7 wrong | E Skys are grey but | C#m that's ok be | F#m7 sunny before | B7 long We | E kissed and cuddled | C#m morning friends | F#m7 kept each other | B7 warm | E Still the feeling | A follows me | E causing this a | B7 larm | E | A | F#m7 | B7 | E It's not me and | C#m it's not you | F#m7 it's not where we | B7 live | E Somethings displaced | C#m somewhere and | F#m7 somethings got to | B7 give | E Could it be the | C#m climate or sad | F#m7 stories in the | B7 news Or | E something hidden | A in the past | E givin me the | B7 blues | E | A | F#m7 | B7 Theres a | E ghost walking | C#m on my grave | F#m7 I'm not even | B7 in it The | E search for reasons | C#m seems so strange I | F#m7 just can't be | B7 gin it | E Maybe the re | C#m ciever is | F#m7 tuned a touch too | B7 fine And the | E feelings I'm re| A ceiving are not | E mine | B7 | E | A | F#m7 | B7 | E Got to push on | C#m got to move | F#m7 got play the | B7 game | E Got to see the | C#m good things | F#m7 never mind the | B7 blame There's | E so much light and | C#m so much shade and | F#m7 so much in be | B7 tween And | E life is so much | A better now | E than it's ever | B7 been | E | A | F#m7 | B7 | E The morning grows | C#m cloud comes in we | F#m7 light the | B7 fire | E Warm and cozy | C#m write a song and | F#m7 aim for something | B7 higher | E Now we're under | C#m way and there's | F#m7 nothing more to | B7 say Except good - | E day | A | E | A | E | A | E || Good day.
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"There's a ghost walking on my grave I'm not even in it"
Now, there's a line! Nice
Enjoyed that, Richard. A sensitive write... you, poet, you!
Nice BAND. Good mix. Nice vocal.
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Thanks Floyd.
Nice comments.
Made my day.
Cheers.
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Hi Rich,
I agree with Floyd - this is a really nice song and performance. And yeah, that line he pointed out is stellar!
Alan
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Hi Rich,
I agree with Floyd - this is a really nice song and performance. And yeah, that line he pointed out is stellar!
Alan
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"There's a ghost walking on my grave I'm not even in it"
Now, there's a line! Nice (a Floyd quote)
I was thinking exactly the same thing! Rich, you have some lyrics here to think about! Good job! Thanks, Torrey
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Thanks for the listen Alan.
Your comments are much appreciated.
Cheers.
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Rich,
I think this is my favorite from you - great lyrics and production - I also really enjoyed the way you sung this. Really good stuff!
Bob
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Really nice work here! I particularly enjoyed the vivid and descriptive lyrics in this one. The whole tune has a really nice sway to it. It is very pretty, and calming. It has a sincere quality that really draws me in. Thanks so much for sharing 
Cheers,
Deryk
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Hey man, I really enjoyed this! I get this feeling all the time. Thought it was just me.
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Hello, Rich
It is a simple but nice song using the golden chord progression of pops. (I - VIm - IIm7 -V7)
Perhaps I believe thousands of songs have been composed with this chord progression, but I think that your originality is expressed exactly in this tune and it is wonderful.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi
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Rich,
Your approach is always so... YOU.
Always sparkling and original.
And that subtle touch of drama in your voice, that works great in this song.
So does the fiddle.
Rob and Anne-Marie
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Hi Torrey.
Thanks for the comments.
It's surprising what pops into one's head.
Cheers.
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"There's a ghost walking on my grave I'm not even in it"
Now, there's a line! Nice
Enjoyed that, Richard. A sensitive write... you, poet, you!
Nice BAND. Good mix. Nice vocal.
fj floyd expressed it so well. And yeah "there's a line!" This is a fine write, arrangement mix and vocal performance. There's a lot to like here...and we did. J&B
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The feeling I get from your songs Rich is that you are a poet the loves to put them to music! Your lyrics are fantastic!
Great mix with a strong vocal.
I really enjoyed this.
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Thanks Mario.
Fantastic comments.
Made my morning.
Now I better go and do some jobs.
Cheers.
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Artfully evokes a familiar melancholy mood. Well written and performed with some jewels lines.
Much enjoyed!
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Hi Bob.
Sorry Iv'e got out of step up my replies.
Had a difficult week.
Thanks for your encouraging comments.
I'm slowly getting more confident with the productions.
Cheers.
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Hi Deryk,
I'm glad you like the lyrics.
It's a bit special when staff comment.
You must see & hear so many songs.
Glad you feel it's sincere also.
It is about real feelings.
Cheers.
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Hi David dude.
Hope you don't feel this way too often.
Cheers.
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