Oh yeah.... this is good.

I caught quite a few Beatles?Paul singing kind of influences in there....and something else.... can't quite place it yet.

exceptionally well done. One of the best ones you've done to this point.

Listen # 2 focused on the lyrics this time.... I'm impressed at the absolute professional quality of the writing. Loved how you worked the groove and the phrasing. And it was nice how you snuck one of my favorite Cream song titles into the bridge second line.... smooth.

Yep... this was a nice listen.

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