Love the lyrics, vocal and the melody. I especially like your "Phantom of the Opera" delivery.

As Tano Music said, the rhyming pattern really set the song apart.

But I agree with Mario about the drums - they're too far back in the mix, and sound like a drum machine clicking out a steady beat that doesn't match the drama of the rest of the instruments. Crank them up, and add some thundering, angry fills!

Despite the nits, I enjoyed listening to your song a lot.


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?