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Very well done, jannesan  I love how gentle and delicate this tune is. I can just close my eyes and get lost in the music. It evokes a sense of nostalgia for me, and the lyricism here helps solidify that sensation. Great work - thanks for sharing! Thanks Deryk for your very kind words Really nice to hear that I've managed to evoke nostalgia with my song  Janne
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Oh, goodness. As others have said - simply lovely.
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Janne, There is such beautiful emotional and moving imagery in this song. The arrangement fits the mood so well. I thought it was great.
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Nice chord progression on this. Thanks for listing. Rob Thanks Rob for your kind comment Janne
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Mmm…
I felt the BREEZE all the way to Norway. Thanks, Janne!
Well done!
Thanks for commenting and feeling my breeze  Enjoy the spring in Norway! Janne
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Cool tune Janne. Loved the oohs and ahhs. Going to try them on my next instrumental Thanks Scott for your positive words Good luck with oohs and aahs Janne
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Very pretty song Janne!! The lyrics are very poetic. I really like your vocal for this style. You always have really cool chord changes in your songs (just heard another about an hour ago)! Very much enjoyed this!! Take care. Greg
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Jannesan..what I really liked about this is the length of your lyric...I struggle to get enough words to make AABA, but you continued with expanded thoughts and images on your topic. I guess your winters are REALLY long and you think about these gentle breezes alot during the cold months!
Also, it seems like your song construction is somewhat unorthodox--maybe additional bars beyond the normal 4 or 8--it is something that captures your ear, so that you think "oh, this chorus isn't over quite yet--I need to continue to listen". And then you are rewarded by a nice, smooth conclusion of that part.
Finally, I think that your simple orchestration is perfect for this type of narrative: the singer is sitting alone, maybe looking out the window, waiting for the season to break--it's a quiet moment, and the arrangement matches it.
You have given me a lot of composition ideas to think about---when is the week that it is warm in Finland, I might want to visit!! Thanks for your enjoyable analysis of my song Lyrics just pour out of me, more than enough of verses for a song so I have to leave out some parts. Recently winters have been quite mild here, and in average also this winter, but February was very cold and March seems to be snowy and cold also, so I'm still waiting for the breeze I probably have got some subconscious inspiration for this kind of acoustic folk song from a band called Shoormal (from Shetland), their song Between Weathers tells about how winter won't let go. I'm glad you noticed my unorthodox song structure, I don't follow rules, I just do what feels good to my ear Some 'fans' of mine have said the same, that my song require several times to listen to. Welcome to Finland, although it is difficult to say what is going to be the warm week this year Janne
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enjoyed this very much, the feel is nice and breezy, fresh, clean Thanks Cliftond for your kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed my simple song Janne
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Well Janne, you seem to do quite good on the your own!
Still this has sort of a different sound from the kind of songs we did for you.
But we are pleasantly surprised! Very well done.
Rob Thanks Rob for your positive words, I'm glad I've managed surprise you Your vocals and your feedback has been an important step on my 'career'. When a right song comes, too difficult for my vocal range, I might ask for your vocals once more Janne
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Janne, There is such beautiful emotional and moving imagery in this song. The arrangement fits the mood so well. I thought it was great. it would be hard to better express what Josie said. We'll only add that the soundstage sounded full and lush on our monitors. Kudos! J&B
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Very interesting composition - nice gentle backing and a really nice chord structure.
Nice work.Peter
Thanks Peter for liking and commenting my gentle song Janne
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Very nice melody and chord progression!
I think that this song is very well expressing the heart that waits for springs all the time.
Really good song!
Enjoyed my listen a lot.
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Shigeki Adachi
Thanks Shigeki Adachi, I'm glad you felt the spirit of waiting for the spring in my song And thanks for mentioning the chord progression, it really works well with the acoustic guitar RT here, no noticeable issues. I think Roddy Frame's music and guitar playing is one of my inspiration here. Janne
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Oh, goodness. As others have said - simply lovely. Thanks David for your lovely comment  Janne
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Wow,
This is really a beautiful song and a great arrangement. I really loved it.
Good job on the vocals.
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Janne, There is such beautiful emotional and moving imagery in this song. The arrangement fits the mood so well. I thought it was great. Thanks Josie for all your kind and beautiful words Janne
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Very pretty song Janne!! The lyrics are very poetic. I really like your vocal for this style. You always have really cool chord changes in your songs (just heard another about an hour ago)! Very much enjoyed this!! Take care. Greg Thanks Greg for your kind feedback I'm glad you liked also my vocal BTW. Your latest song is fantastic, I'll be commenting it after you have added lyrics and description of the instruments Janne
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Janne, There is such beautiful emotional and moving imagery in this song. The arrangement fits the mood so well. I thought it was great. it would be hard to better express what Josie said. We'll only add that the soundstage sounded full and lush on our monitors. Kudos! J&B Thanks Janice & Bud for listening, I appreciate your nice comment
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Wow,
This is really a beautiful song and a great arrangement. I really loved it.
Good job on the vocals. Thanks David for your kind comment, I'm glad you liked my song, arrangement and the vocals Janne
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