Holey crap Robert we lived in the same house!
Yeah, me too! Late 60's, early 70's .. a very special time indeed.
Great writing IMHO.
Loved:
"Steve moves to the chicken coop
wires it for sound
we get out of bed to cash a check
the sky`s upside down
gentle Jane changes her name
to New Child Arising
don`t be surprised in the house with eyes
leap before looking"
And also: "you can`t get lost can`t get lost if you come from nowhere"
Really good, Robert, enjoyed the listen!