PG Music Home Forums General Discussion User Showcase He's An African Rhino (revisited and updated with Audiophile BIAB)

In 2015, Joanne Cooper motivated a number of us on the forum to write a song about the plight of the rhinoceroses.

As I consequence, I wrote "He’s an African Rhino". At that time, I did some research and, for inspiration, I downloaded a picture of Sudan, the world’s last male northern white rhino. Last week, I was saddened to read that Sudan passed away on Monday March 19, 2018. As a result, I revisted and updated my song.

In memory of Sudan and his legacy...

• ♫♫ He’s An African Rhino

Until Joanne brought it to my attention, I had no idea that rhino species everywhere are endangered and that the risk of losing them to history is very real. In 2015, I read that it was estimated that all species would be extinct in just 20 years. For some species, the situation looks slightly better these days.

In returning to "He’s an African Rhino", I’ve brought it into 2018 using the Audiophile edition of Band In A Box (I had the UltraPak in 2015) as well as some new software tools to help shape the revised arrangement and the final mix.

Thank you in advance for listening. Please feel free to comment on any aspect of the song.

Regards,
Noel


Band In A Box

518: Bass, Electric, Pop HalfNotes Ev 085
2024: Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm CountryJohn Ev 085
378: Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming DoubleTime Ev 088
689: Organ, B3, Background Pop Ev 085
RealDrums: NashvilleEven8^1-a:Sidestick, HiHat , b:Snare, Ride


Lyrics

Clouds of dust billow and swirl
As he thunders across the land
Such a fearsome beast with those horns at the end of his nose
He's as strong as a team of horses
The savannah is his to command
He's a mighty statement of power wherever he goes

He's an African rhino
An African rhino
Running wild and free
So awesome to see
Full of majesty

Millions of years, his family walked Earth
With never a worry in sight
Then men came along bringing trucks and guns and chains
With their greedy eyes and hungry hearts
These hunters are deadlier than dynamite
So far luck’s been a friend and kept him hidden from their callous campaigns

He's an African rhino
An African rhino
Running wild and free
So awesome to see
Full of majesty

In twenty years,
If nothing changes
All of his race 'll be gone
He's crying out for friends
Will you join us and help make amends?

He's an African rhino
An African rhino
Running wild and free
So awesome to see
And he's desperately needing you and me to...
...Save the rhino
Save the rhino
Running wild and free
So awesome to see
Full of majesty

Be a bridge to tomorrow
Help save the rhino

©2015 Noel Adams, words and music, all rights reserved.


Other Tools

Realband: multiple track generating with Multiriff
Miroslav Philharmonik: chimes (MIDI)
Reaper: recording vocals and mixing
Ozone 8: mastering
Nectar 2: vocal processing
Melodyne Studio 4: vocal harmonies

Very nice tune Noel. Inspirational message.

Noel,

I remember this song very well - it was outstanding back in 2015 and the revisions / updates make it even better.

Incredible mix...

Bob

That was a really nice song Noel!! I appreciate the effort you put into that it sounded great! Thanks, Torrey

Thanks for finding the time to have a listen, Scott. Always appreciate your visit...

Hi Noel, thank you for sharing this with us! Very attractive title and easy to follow lyrics. Awesome! Well done!

Hi Bob,

Thank you for dropping in. I thought of you when I was mastering this using Ozone 8 because I picked a preset called "Smooth Folk" and the thought popped into my mind, "I bet Bob Dean would like this preset!". Seems that you did

Thanks again!

All the best,
Noel

Noel,
THANKS for putting this issue to the fore via a powerful musical statement.
A wonderful arrangement bright as well as solemn as needed.
I enjoyed it.

I was so sad to hear about his passing. Our local museum has a Wildlife Photography exhibit every year, and this year it focused on the impact humans have on wildlife around the world. Of course, rhinos were featured. Very sad imagery.

This sound was sad and wonderful at the same time. Thanks for sharing!

Hi, Noel !:))


What a beautiful tune
so delicately sung
and with an important
message to us all !

I must say that this
is one of your absolute
best !

Cheers
Dani

Noel,

This is a wonderful production! Everything sounds great.

Just a spectacular performance and engineering job all around.

Happy Easter, too, by the way!

Hi Torrey,

Thank you for having a listen. Appreciate the comments.

All the best,
Noel

Noel
Sounds great - beautiful mix everything is wonderfully clear.
Excellent song.

Peter

Great to hear again, Noel.

Mix sounds great.


It would be nice to have a forum here to collect the "politically conscious" songs... We could have a bunch of good ones...

fj

I thoroughly enjoyed this one It has a sad tone to it but I definitely feel a glimpse of hope in it as well. It is a very sad reality what is happening, and refreshing to hear this usually covered-up topic publicly addressed.

Really well done - thanks for sharing!

Hi Joe,

I appreciate the visit and the comments! Thanks for visiting the thread.

All the best,
Noel

Hello, Noel

A really beautiful song!
I also remember this song very well.
I think the mixing has improved much better than the previous version.
Your characteristics often appear in this melody.
I love especially the short intro and the deceptive cadence at the ending.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi

Enjoyed it then and again today. We had read about his passing a couple of days ago.

We've always enjoyed your songs for many reasons but each time I (Bud) hear one I realize just how well you present a lyric. Your enunciation is very musical but also the sheer clarity of it makes every word understood...even for my failing ears And if you have something to say, as you always do, that is a great gift.

Excellent song about a sad state of affairs.

J&B

Hi Ray,

Thanks for taking the time to have a listen. It's always good to see you. Appreciate the comments.

Regards,
Noel

Hi Ember,

I'm glad you had a chance to have a listen. Thank you for the comments. Hopefully Sudan's passing will make a difference as his legacy lives on.

Regards,
Noel