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Hi all. This song was written for songtradr. They wanted a song that mentioned spring flowers and blooms. I thought I would contrast spring with death and renewal.I also wanted to evoke emotion. In the end I wasn't successful. This is a step away from my normal write. All comments and suggestions welcome. Rob What Love BringsDaddy bought some roses in the spring of 65 and laid them at the head of Mamma's grave. She'd been fighting off the cancer on a Saturday she died. It was a sorry thing to end that way. I feel the spring time breezes as they warmed the bitter air. Apple blossoms float around and seem so unaware. Rays of light creep through the trees and warmed my ailing heart. Ive been hoping for the spring and what love brings. bridge I feel the spring time breezes as they warmed the bitter air. Apple blossoms float around and seem so unaware. Rays of light creep through the trees and warmed my ailing heart. Ive been hoping for the spring and what love bring ****** Song Summary ************* Title: What Love Brings File:What Love Brings.SGU Key=G , Tempo 85, Length (m:s)=3:17 2 bar intro, 64 bar chorus, from bar 3 to bar 66. Repeat x1 chorus Melody has 737 notes, Melody harmony is < no harmony >(0) No Soloist track. Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0, Style is _LONESON.STY (Lone Son Acoustic Guitar Ballad) RealTracks in style: ~2474:Bass, Acoustic, Held Ev 085 RealTracks in style: ~2505:Piano, Electric, HeldChords 085 RealTracks in style: 2914:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Folky16thsBrent Ev16 085 RealTracks in song: 2334:String Quartet, Rhythm PopChamber Ev 085 RealDrums in Song: BrushesBoomChickEv16: a: Brushes Smoothb: Brushes Boom Vocals My self Mixed with Studio One Pro *******************
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I really like the songs made with this style, especially the acoustic guitar #2914 fits nicely your peaceful melodic ballad. Great performance and lyrics, I can feel the spring time breeze here also  Janne
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Rob,
This is excellent - love the song and vocal. Great mix as well.
Bob
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Rob,
This is nice. Haven't heard you do anything like this before.
A good write. Really nice arrangement - works well for the song and its subject matter. Good mix.
Your vocal is really nice - emotional.
Well done.
fj
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Most different indeed but the contrast, as you mentioned, is really well done. There is assuredly a "heavy" feel to it but the hints of renewal are most effective.
Very creative and, as always, well performed.
J&B
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Rob,
I guess you meant you weren`t successful with Songtradr- you certainly were in evoking emotion...there`s sadness in both lyrics and your vocal.
I enjoyed this reflective side of your music.
Well done on the production too.
Robert
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Loved this Rob. Super vocal and lyric. Loved the acoustic too. Well done
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Good one Rob.
Love the lyrics and your vocal suits perfectly.
A touch of early Johnny Cash in this one.
Thumbs up from here.
Cheers.
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Wow - what a powerful tune Your vocal delivery and the lyrics are flawlessly executed here. It is incredibly sad, but I love how raw and emotional it is. The tune almost has a dream-like quality to it as well, I found. Great work on this - thanks so much for sharing!
Cheers,
Deryk
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This is a great song Rob with an excellent vocal! The acoustic guitar was a wonderful choice! Thanks, Torrey
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Nice one Rob. It reminds me a little of Gordon Lightfoot. Excellent writing and vocal. I enjoyed my listen, Tom
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Nice. I enjoy all your work, but I think you should do some more of this style. It does suit you well. I agree with Tom, there is a little Gordon Lightfoot in this, and that's a good thing. I like this one.
Steve
Steve Young Music"In order to compose, all you need to do is remember a tune that nobody else has thought of." - Robert Schumann
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Hello, Rob
A beautiful melody reminiscent of Simon and Garfunkel's "Feelin' Gloovy" is wonderful.
Unlike usual rock and roll style, your fork style song is also very nice.
Your vocal is really comfortable us usual.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi
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Different than what I'm used to hearing from you, but very good.
I see both Tom and Steve mentioned Gordon Lightfoot, I'm hearing a bit of that too, both in the write and the vocal.
Nice arrangement too and the mix sounds good.
Good song, enjoyed the listen!
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Rob,
This is nice. Haven't heard you do anything like this before.
A good write. Really nice arrangement - works well for the song and its subject matter. Good mix.
Your vocal is really nice - emotional.
Well done.
fj Very much agree!! This is really beautiful!! My new fave of yours...I think this style really suits you. Love it!! Take care. Greg
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I really like the songs made with this style, especially the acoustic guitar #2914 fits nicely your peaceful melodic ballad. Great performance and lyrics, I can feel the spring time breeze here also Janne Thanks for listening Janne.
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Rob,
This is excellent - love the song and vocal. Great mix as well.
Bob Thank you Bob.
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Rob,
This is nice. Haven't heard you do anything like this before.
A good write. Really nice arrangement - works well for the song and its subject matter. Good mix.
Your vocal is really nice - emotional.
Well done.
fj Hello Floyd. Thank you.
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Most different indeed but the contrast, as you mentioned, is really well done. There is assuredly a "heavy" feel to it but the hints of renewal are most effective.
Very creative and, as always, well performed.
J&B Thank you J and B.
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Rob,
I guess you meant you weren`t successful with Songtradr- you certainly were in evoking emotion...there`s sadness in both lyrics and your vocal.
I enjoyed this reflective side of your music.
Well done on the production too.
Robert Thank you Rob.
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