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The lead on this is absolutely beautiful sounding. Very well done! It's a very lovely song. Thanks Ember Wow - this is stunning  Very, very pretty sounding. Also, you deserve kudos for the production on this. It sounds super professional, so much so that I'd even go so far as to say this is better than some professional recordings I've heard. It is so lush and bright. I wouldn't bat an eyelash if I heard this on the radio. Very well done - thanks so much for sharing! Thanks Deryck Peter
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Peter & Leon,
I enjoyed the wise reflection in the lyrics, especially these:
Skin gets thinner
Bones get weaker
Nights get longer
Thoughts get bleaker
All the things I thought I knew
Not a single one of them was true
ouch- that hits home!
Leon`s vocal conveys the mood with warmth so the feeling is sad without being morbid.
The guitar break is sublime!
Very good work.
Robert
I was going to write the same thing about those lyrics but I see Robert beat me to the punch. I really loved that lead guitar phrasing and tone!
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Hello, Peter & Leon
It will be autumn and winter from now on in Australia.
A little lonely atmosphere is very well expressed.
Very nice lead guitar!
Vocals, too!
Enjoyed my listen a lot.
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi Thanks very much Shigeki. [/quote]
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Peter & Leon,
I enjoyed the wise reflection in the lyrics, especially these:
Skin gets thinner
Bones get weaker
Nights get longer
Thoughts get bleaker
All the things I thought I knew
Not a single one of them was true
ouch- that hits home!
Leon`s vocal conveys the mood with warmth so the feeling is sad without being morbid.
The guitar break is sublime!
Very good work.
Robert
Thanks Robert I'll pass those comments on.
Peter
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Leon's vocal qualities remind me of Rod McKuen.
A lovely setting for the narrative.
The lead lifts the song out of the box. Appreciate your comments Ray. Peter
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I can't add to the other comments, but enjoyed this very much. The interludes were quite nice.
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Very beautiful melody with nice chording. I like the melancholy lyrics and how the mood is captured in the piano and the lead guitar.
Janne Thanks Janne Well done PeterF! I enjoyed the lyrics and the chord progression. Very rich sounding instruments too. Thanks for sharing! Appreciate your commenting Joe Lovely laid back song. Super vocal and lyric.. Guitar was just excellent Peter. Some very sweet playing.. Thanks Scott Peter
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Nice lyrics. And oh. I've been there. The tone and fx on the lead vocal, along with the lead guitar really set the mood very well.
If it were me would consider pulling the instrumentation down a bit ( and/or panning the instruments more) so your vocal rides more above it -- everything you chose is perfect, though. Very nice.
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Every time Janices hears this I notice a tear on her face. That says it all really.
It’s melancoly, emotive, well performed and produced.
Your and Leon’s years together really shine on this with the wonderful vocal and guitar interplay.
Outstanding guys!!
J&B
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Another great song by you. This is a song we could listen to several times in a row. In fact while I'm writing it's finished and now I listen to it again.  Great work as usual. Sergio
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I can't add to the other comments, but enjoyed this very much. The interludes were quite nice. Thanks Marty Peter
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Nice lyrics. And oh. I've been there. The tone and fx on the lead vocal, along with the lead guitar really set the mood very well.
If it were me would consider pulling the instrumentation down a bit ( and/or panning the instruments more) so your vocal rides more above it -- everything you chose is perfect, though. Very nice.
Thanks for commenting Phil. Peter
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Every time Janices hears this I notice a tear on her face. That says it all really.
It’s melancoly, emotive, well performed and produced.
Your and Leon’s years together really shine on this with the wonderful vocal and guitar interplay.
Outstanding guys!!
J&B
Thanks Bud - I appreciate that (hope Janice has cheered up!) Peter
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Another great song by you. This is a song we could listen to several times in a row. In fact while I'm writing it's finished and now I listen to it again. Great work as usual. Sergio Thanks very much Sergio. Peter
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