Cliftond,
there's some buzzing in there. Is that single coils? Doesn't sound like to me but could be.
A few things I'd suggest for this lovely song -
one is to get a de esseer onto your vocal to tame the esses and a couple of plosives a bit
To reduce the volume of the guitars that plays between vocal phrases and behind the vocal.
Those guitars are VERY bright - almost ice pick level so EQ some of that bit out.
Lovely song.


Cheers
rayc
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