Originally Posted By: Deej56
J&B,

Great intro. Don’t know why, but had a Jimmy Buffet feel to me--but still unique and fresh. It works great. Wonderful vocals and a nice melody. My only thought would be to try to rhyme “fedora” with someone more than “adores her”—even just one time to serve as a change up on the rhyme. Just my two cents, but a very cool listen.

Kind regards,

Deej


Thanks for listening and the kind remarks! Yeah, I felt it was a bit redundant also but by then the muse had departed. She only makes rare appearances for me smile

J&B

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