Very cool tune Greg. Very nicely done and produced.

Seeing as how there's what, 4 verses? and no choruses to speak of (or 4 chos and no vs), I'd suggest dropping out an instrument or 2 in the next to last verse to give interest. Like maybe the drums? Without the drums for a bit, It might even become more dreamy.

Loved the lyric too.

Peace,

Ian

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