Originally Posted By: Noel96
Eddie,

These lyrics work so well. The first verse is an excellent setup for what is to follow. And I love the way that you've managed to incorporate "remember" alongside it's polar opposite "forget". That's very clever hook writing in my book.


THIS statement is the best compliment a writer can get. The remember and forget was deliberate, much in the way Jackson Browne once side "the SOUND of your own WHEELS" in "Take It Easy". Because, of course, wheels make sound.

Thanks to all who commented. Now let's move on to Good Things Come!

Last edited by eddie1261; 06/04/18 10:33 AM.