Great track! I’m not sure who would be “dancing” regarding this theme!

I liked the rather flat production..I think it was perfect for the message delivery. Sometimes less is more, if you know what I mean, and this was a perfect example of that approach.

I liked your lyrics storytelling— you got the message across clearly and effectively, and I liked the trumpet addition to give it some instrumental flair. Thanks for posting!!


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