Brad, there's a lot I like about this song, and only a few complaints.

Great title, catchy chorus. Good lyrics, pleasant vocal.

I've got a few quibbles about the arrangement and mix... But then the final chorus comes around, and it doesn't really matter, because it's a great chorus and it brings the song home good and proper.

It might be nice to have some more vocals on it, but I'd take Guitarhacker's advice any day over mine. laugh

I enjoyed the song!


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?