I don’t know what your original idea was for the song, but I think you were probably right to change it up the way you mentioned. The tempo is right for the messaging, and the overall minor tone fits as well. Definitely held my interest. I had to look up “Marie leveau”, so you motivated me to think about it further even after I listened. I especially liked the little subtle soft guitar riffs in the background. The overall understated production and your vocal with limited effects was very affective. Looking forward to hearing more from you!!


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