I am not quite sure I understand the assignment.

I listened to it, and it is a nice jazz piece, and the lyrics and delivery are individual and distinct in voice as your other pieces are.

There would be NUMEROUS things I could say, but in these types of cases I always figure the artist did what they wanted to do.

With the sense of time urgency could you give some ideas on what you would like to have feedback on?

When I am asking for rapid feedback, I ask for things like:

Is the tempo right
Does it have the right feel
Is it catchy?
Is it too busy?
Is the melody ok, can it be improved?
Thoughts on the vocals?
Thoughts on mix?
Thoughts on effects..
Instrumentation..
and so forth

Just to be helpful, with no direction, people would be guessing, as I am now.

I can say it has a fun feel to it, but in terms of something you might want to do sometime with (and specifically what that is) I would have no idea what to say until I know what you want to do with it, and what you think might need fixing.

I am saying all of this now because this might help for future requests of this type.

Thanks!

David Snyder
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