Originally Posted By: GocartMoz
...The only thing that seemed a touch off to me was the ending. It was a bit abrupt. However, with a vocal melody it may be fine.
Dave


I took another listen with these cans, and also a look at the notation and it seems like the piano chord is left out of those last two "shots". If anything, I'll probably drop the last one, but I think if I add in the piano chord to the first one it will help fatten it up. Maybe it will sound less abrupt that way. I am thinking about extending it a bit also.

Thanks for the thoughtful listen and comment.

Last edited by Tangmo; 08/30/18 04:26 PM.
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