Fred, just listened to "Monterey Sun"...loved how you used the triplet motif of "monterey" as the hook. Also was very impressed with your lyrical rhymes--all solid, very few false ones in there, and the 'sketchy' story was moved along nicely throughout the lyric.

The style/chart was kept simple, and I think that's a very good thing when you want your listener to pay attention to/enjoy the lyrics, so I give you a thumbs-up on that aspect!

Real nice vocal quality/mix, and the solo's were appropriate and interesting.

I'll probably check in to listen to more, based on this first blush!

Great work!

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