It held my interest from beginning to end

a great write, some super imagery

a very Bruce sounding "Seven Days In Vegas" line

loved the arrangement and overall sound

I would've changed the lines

There's only crap
Where I once stood

but it certainly conveys the down and out assessment of the character

and the thing is that you have a fleshed-out character that's relatable

that's more than 99% of songwriters do or maybe even understand.

Kenny