Originally Posted By: w
guy breaking up with a women always spells disaster mostly for the guy especially when he sings these closing words

" Vultures throw the dice on your tomb
"

on the other hand i may have misinterpreted your lyrics

having said that i did enjoy your composition/arrangement

good luck in the composition

perhaps you could provide us with the url to any other compositions you may posted to SoundCloud or elsewhere


Thanks w! I'm glad you enjoyed my song smile That part of the lyrics felt bit like a dead-end to me, I couldn't continue further... it tries to bring some kind of "final judgement" feeling, leaving impression that person might not necessarily be alive, but the story does not tell. But very nice to hear your interpretation of it.

Here you can find my other compositions: Soundcloud page

Janne

Last edited by jannesan; 09/25/18 10:28 PM.
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