Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
You are a poet with an extra gift of being able to musically express your writing.

This is excellent.

You are lucky, indeed, to have such an imagination and the ability to reflect so deeply on childhood memories. Janice has that...Bud not so much.

We so much like the arrangement and what you did with your vocals.

We much enjoyed this powerful production...in all aspects.

J&B




J&B,

That`s very kind- especially coming from folks who really listen and contribute so much to this forum.
Production is getting easier ... and harder, as the standard set by the music I hear coming from home studios just goes in leaps and bounds.

Robert

Originally Posted By: Tano Music
Robert..I found the title beckoning me to listen. From the beginning, I wasn't sure where you were going melodically--then I decided to just sit back and listen without being hung up on strict song construction rules. Once I did this, I was able to consider your work as a type of
stream of consciousness. I enjoyed the instrumentation and the texture it created. Your lyric is mystical, and I also found myself trying to listen 'too hard' to fully get your meaning. Listening to your work showed me that I'm probably too bought into conventional song construction to be a fair listener to work like yours, and some others. I need to let go of my expectations, then just listen and absorb. Once I did that, I enjoyed 'the ride' of your track. Great work!


I`m glad that somewhere in the listen you got something from this.
It actually has a very clear construction, in my expanded, make it interesting, circle of fifths universe!

Robert