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There's an odd click at 0.18.
Cheers
rayc
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Dave, I liked some elements of this track and others I was not so hot on. I really liked the composition, I love the string textures and I thought your lyric was really really good. I thought the vocal was a little strained at points. And I thought that the abrupt stops at the end of your segments were a bit too sharp...I like the idea of the stops right there, but maybe not so sharp-edged. I missed your earlier post so maybe you could lyric but for me I really like to read along as I listen. Also in general I love your focus on strain on your pieces… Keep it going!
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Hi Dave, Nice work on this mix down! Definitely an improvement there seems to be more clarity around 500hz. Well done!
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Joe
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Hello Dave,
I haven't heard the original but this nicely done. The strings compliment the melody very nicely. The only thing that caught my ear that might benefit from another look is the abruptness of the stops. If you could let the vocal and backing tracks fade a bit until you pick up again, I think that would be something to consider -just my opinion, though.
Terrific song!
Alan
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Thanks!
I think I got it!
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Hi Tano! Sorry it took me so long to reply. I decided to remix this baby. I tore it down and rebuilt it altogether. As usual, I'll meet most people half way! =D All the best, Dave https://soundcloud.com/davebrooksmusicfactory/the-look-in-your-eyes
Also, please go to: https://soundcloud.com/davebrooksmusicfactoryHP Pavilion p6-2330; 1T; GB: 22; AMD Processor; Focusrite Scarlett Solo; Line mixer: Seismic Landsland-12p; DAW's: BIAB, Pro Tools 2018.8.1 HD; Wave Pad Sound Editor.
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Zup ya'll!!! Sorry it took me so long to reply but I decided to do a total reconstruct of this diddy. I think I tried to meet you half way on this, but it feels better to me now also! Like I said, there are no perfect songs because many people love the breaks! =D Anywho, here-we-go! All the best, Dave https://soundcloud.com/davebrooksmusicfactory/the-look-in-your-eyes
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Sounds good, Dave. Strong inventive devices; meaning, pauses, stings, tension and resolve, those kinds of things.
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Hi Mr. Shaw!
Right again as usual!
Thanks for the listen...
All the best,
Dave
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