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Originally Posted By: dani48
Hi, Peter & Leon !:))


Those lyrics and that melody !
I could never ever come up
with anything even close to that !!
Wonderful, guys ! five thumbs up
from me !:))

Cheers
Dani


Thanks for the nice review Dani. I could never emulate the Beach Boys the way you do.

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Great work again Peter! Yes I hear Dylan in this along with a lot of other influences! I just really liked the flow of this song! Thanks, Torrey

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Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
Whoa....man, does that ever capture Dylan's mid 60's period...was that Al Kooper on the organ? smile

As Robert so well stated, "Leon does that wry observation thing as well as anyone I can think of"

And, you nailed that Dylanesque vocal feel. Something we should hear more of!

Nice guitar, write, vocals, harp...nice everything.

Well done y'all!!!

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The beginning is sudden - maybe a fade in of the 1st 2 seconds?
The spoken/singing is as Knofler as Dylan and more Ian Hunter than both - if the organ was mixed higher it'd sound more like Mott the Hoople.
Cool song.


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Peter,

Nice to hear you sing for a change!
Professionally crafted song, one of many top notch productions.

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Originally Posted By: Scott C
Peter I am with Dave on this one. You have an excellent voice. This song has a great vocal, super lyric and excellent backtrack. Loved the guitar dancing in the background


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Originally Posted By: Deryk - PG Music
Really nice work smile As others mentioned, this definitely has a Dylan vibe to it. Love the backing tracks, love your vocals, and love the lyrics too. Nicely catchy and really powerful with its delivery as well.

Not a thing I'd change on this one - thanks for sharing smile


Thanks Deryk.

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And the crowd stands, sways, and sings along with that chorus! Just great.

Dylanesque in a non-ironic way. I like this a lot.


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Originally Posted By: beatmaster
Dylan sound alike definitely and a song to match the man himself.

Good stuff.


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Originally Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm
Great lyrics, especially the chorus. I wish I would have penned that. And yes, very Dylan.


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Peter,

This is great! A very cool song, but your vocal really puts it over the top. Love that delivery!

Great job guys!

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Peter:

This is a terrific write and outstanding production—some killer lines in those lyrics. Really hits on all facets of the song—like the back up harmonies starting on that second chorus. I like the Dylan feel to this, but would love to hear in contrast what a less Dylan-esque take might sound like. Great, great tune. Enjoyed it a ton.

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Originally Posted By: gruverider

"My friends are saying I can’t see
What’s right under my nose
But I have no desire to view
What they’re eager to expose
There are dreams we cling to
Thought we know they can’t be true
There are lies we tell ourselves
In order to get through"


Wonderful writing! Great retro vibe - To the composition and especially the vocal!


well done all around!


Much appreciated Lawrence.

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Great work again Peter! Yes I hear Dylan in this along with a lot of other influences! I just really liked the flow of this song! Thanks, Torrey


Thanks for the comments Torrey

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Originally Posted By: rayc
The beginning is sudden - maybe a fade in of the 1st 2 seconds?
The spoken/singing is as Knofler as Dylan and more Ian Hunter than both - if the organ was mixed higher it'd sound more like Mott the Hoople.
Cool song.


Thanks for the comments Ray.

Peter


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Peter,

Nice to hear you sing for a change!
Professionally crafted song, one of many top notch productions.

Rob and Anne-Marie


Appreciate that - glad the vocal was ok.

Peter

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And the crowd stands, sways, and sings along with that chorus! Just great.

Dylanesque in a non-ironic way. I like this a lot.


I can dream! Thanks
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Peter,

This is great! A very cool song, but your vocal really puts it over the top. Love that delivery!

Great job guys!

Bob


Thanks a lot Bob.

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Peter:

This is a terrific write and outstanding production—some killer lines in those lyrics. Really hits on all facets of the song—like the back up harmonies starting on that second chorus. I like the Dylan feel to this, but would love to hear in contrast what a less Dylan-esque take might sound like. Great, great tune. Enjoyed it a ton.

All the best,

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Thanks for the review appreciated.

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hi peter great job love the vocal enjoyed my listen eric


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Nice write, well sung, classic sound. Catchy chorus.

In spots the vocal seemed a bit buried in the mix. Or my hearing is going. crazy Didn't want to miss any lyrics, because it's a well written.

Like others, I enjoyed the listen.


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Peter & Leon,

As many others said, this is very Dylan.
The chord progression is also very Dylan-like.
I agree with Dave.
You should handle the lead vocal more often, Peter! I dig Leon's vocals of course but you have something special happening too.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

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