[quote=Rustyspoon#]Having fun with BIAB. It is about a hard day of work of city janitor. [/url]
Top of the morning...
Chuckle....I'm happy to echo other comments.
Creative lyrical write, well performed.
It a has swampy sort of mood too it which works well for me.
You definitely have your own style and BIAB is an excellent tool to nurture it and keep you interested.
I'm glad the phrase kindled your creativity.
Got me to thinking about what subject I'd come up with if I desired to squeeze that narly phrase into an actual song.

Well done.....and thanks for posting it.....back to it.