Dave, I liked some elements of this track and others I was not so hot on. I really liked the composition, I love the string textures and I thought your lyric was really really good. I thought the vocal was a little strained at points. And I thought that the abrupt stops at the end of your segments were a bit too sharp...I like the idea of the stops right there, but maybe not so sharp-edged. I missed your earlier post so maybe you could lyric but for me I really like to read along as I listen. Also in general I love your focus on strain on your pieces… Keep it going!


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