"Deej56"...

The way you released the lyrics for "Show Me" from your wounded heart certainly delivered on the deadly serious romantic agony that was barely contained in them. And those lyrics! There's so many of them that they become almost a near-relentless stream-of-consciousness, which complemented the driving music and implacable rhythm. The person who would be the subject of your passionate plea would surely find it difficult, if not impossible, not to yield to your need. Shucks, it was easy for me to imagine you on your bended knees as you crooned this one out :-)

Strong, focused, urgent and dramatic songwriting and performance was demo'd here, "Deej56" and Mr. Vaughn. Don't let each other go, too soon, at least!

Sincerely,

LOREN (a.k.a. "bluage")

Last edited by bluage; 10/27/18 06:31 PM.
"Music is what feelings sound like."-- borrowed from a Cakewalk Music Creator forum member, "Mamabear".