That was great. You really have a great voice and it shines through the mix, but not overpowering.


What did you use for flute? (I'm always looking for good flute sounds - yours had a slight Ian Anderson edge to it).

There are a couple of typos in your lyrics, if you are interested.

The main thing I would do is maybe equalize the drums little bit - they sounded a little distant from the mix - just to blend them in a little better.

But otherwise, a great song (from my perspective).


John

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