James, I listened all the way through and there are some nice elements here, but I felt like it’s a track that is begging for a clear melody line...and why not add in some nice strings? As a basic track to start to build up from, I think it’s very good, but I think it has the potential to be even better with some additions. Thanks for sharing your work!


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