Some very good writing here, Mike! I certainly like the message.

Your mixing skills are getting better!

I agree with the other comments about the drums, the kick especially should be louder. I know that you have Neutron 2, try and use it on the drum track. You will find that neutron comes with quite a few presets for use on a drum track, and you should find a couple that should work well with maybe some minor tweaks.

But good song, enjoyed the listen!