Hi Torrey,
you sure know how to write outstanding songs, man, what a killer that is.
I, too, think, that the style you ended up with is the absolutely right one, but the song itself is so good, I could imagine that it might work in others, too.
And I do know the surprising effect when youi test your composition with a hundred different styles - very often, or even most of the time, I finally decide to take one I would never have thought of before.
Vocals grat like always, and for the Ahs you must somehow have managed to get them done by John, Paul and George - awesome...
A great song - can't get enough of it !!!
Regards,
Stefan