Agree with other posters, vocal a bit lost in the background..have you considered a portion of the vocal with just the piano, like at the end, then bring in your heavy artillery as you move the song forward? Just a suggestion that might give you a chance to plant the lyric idea firmly before embellishing with more color and volume.


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