Hi Misha,

What a nice song and composition! I truly enjoyed listening to that. I like your choice of instruments, it worked really well.

I agree with Dave - if your vocal were just 2 db lower it would "glue" better with the rest of the mix. Also I think you fade out a bit too quickly, maybe do it over 4 or 8 bars next time. But - as Dave wrote - this is just a matter of personal taste.

I'm looking forward to your next project!
Will