Kenny good stuff!
Guitar magic at 3:25 smile
I agree with most that maybe vocal a bit closer.

Here is offbeat thought..
Your choruses really shape this song, especially endings of first three lines.

I will wait for you
Tell your boss at the diner you’re thru
Blue eyed girl in a black and white town
We could leave tonight
Without a sound

I think, it might sound more powerful and better accented if you put short guitar solo licks at the end of phrases to kind of echo the vocals.

Misha.