Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
Kenny good stuff!
Guitar magic at 3:25 smile
I agree with most that maybe vocal a bit closer.

Here is offbeat thought..
Your choruses really shape this song, especially endings of first three lines.

I will wait for you
Tell your boss at the diner you’re thru
Blue eyed girl in a black and white town
We could leave tonight
Without a sound

I think, it might sound more powerful and better accented if you put short guitar solo licks at the end of phrases to kind of echo the vocals.

Misha.




Thank you for those ideas and your kind words