Originally Posted By: Al-David
Originally Posted By: Scott C
Lovely song Robert. Loved the frog croaking. Cool chord structure. Some very cool sounds going on in the background. The dissonant Bouzouk ticking was very cool. Super vocal and mix sounds great on the headphones.


I think Scott was reading my mind - I couldn't have expressed my thoughts better. That was a really cool listen!!! The lyric, the vocal, the mix, the band - all spot on. Nicely done.

Alan


Thanks, Alan!

Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
It makes sense to me Robert!! Really cool song here!! Some wonderful lyrical images and a passionate vocal. Really, really like this!! I remember telling my daughter I wrote a song for her and her brother (she was about 9 or 10). She was very excited about it. I played if for her and she said "that doesn't make any sense". Maybe it will to her someday. Great stuff here!! Take care. Greg


Greg,
I`m glad you understood.
Many of us songwriters toil in obscurity - with the faint hope that our kids will one day
"discover" Dad or Mum`s talent! In the interim I`m going for the bliss in retirement.

Robert

Originally Posted By: tommyad
I don’t remember ever hearing such an East meets West song being posted hear. Retirement dreams of jungle and beaches. A haunting vocal and wildly dissonant sounds and effects make this a compelling listen. Not to mention the challenging artful lyrics. You are certainly inventive and I always look forward to your offerings. Nicely done, Tom


Tom,
I tried using a Thai folk instrument on an earlier song- you got it right, they can be "wildly dissonant"! I`m happy my tinkering with styles keeps you coming back.

Robert

Originally Posted By: floyd jane
An interesting grouping of instruments and a cool sound.

A thought provoking write. Nice vocal and a good mix.

I enjoyed the listen.


Floyd,
Thank you for your listen and likes.

Robert