Kenny,

Clever lyrics here—nice phrasing on the vocals that make it engaging. And a sweet chorus—love those first two lines; nice writing there. Lyrically, not sure those last two lines in the bridge work for me—if he can’t be fixed and she can’t be changed—but that’s a subjective thing; it may work just fine, so use or lose. Really strong tune, Kenny—enjoyed it!

All the best,

Deej