Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Noel,

This is a delight.

A strong write. Perhaps your best, (in my opinion).
The first verse paints a picture of a moment in time which leads perfectly to the "philosophy" of the chorus.
The chorus then states its purpose succinctly, simply, unequivocally...
(the began/dance rhyme is nice, fresh).
The second verse presents a nice expanded view, again with nicely painted pictures.
The bridge expands out further. Nice.
All leading back to the chorus as they should.
The tag lines are a truly fresh way to finish (and complete) a song.

The production is strong, too.
A perfect melding of guitars and percussion.
That RT (RnBPop8thsJoe) is a great find. Nicely used.
Adding the strum in at the chorus - nice.
BossaRockPerc suits the song so well. Dropping it out at the bridge - so "right"...
The viola - added in at the perfect time.
Your vocal is nestled in perfectly, too...

Excellent arrangement!!! Excellent mix.

All around top shelf. One of your best without question.

fj

Hey floyd!

Thanks for taking time to listen and comment. You made my day smile

This song actually grew from a long-forgotten comment that my dad once made to me.

While I was doing some of Andrea Stolpe's destination writing on the topic of 'Spring', in the hope that it would lead to some song lyrics, the image of a blossoming cherry tree came to mind. That image suddenly transported me back to when I was around 9 or 10 and I was standing beside my dad on our back porch. He was looking at the flower-covered cherry tree in our back garden and saying to me, "That tree reminds me of the day I got married. It's beautiful. It looks like winter is done." Once this memory resurfaced, all I needed to do was to grab a huge chunk of poetic license and develop the memory into a story. I have no idea what my dad was thinking that day but, a few decades later, he certainly provided me with a good starting place for a song.

Once again, thank you for visiting.

All the best,
Noel


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