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44kfl #501759 11/16/18 09:01 PM
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Kenny,

This is inspired music creating from a master-craftsman!

I love everything about this. Your writing is incredibly strong. Using the metaphor of the junkyard Mustang, you've shaped a really wonderful lyrical journey and one that vividly paints the picture of a dented relationship that's seen better days. Underlying all this, though, is the hope that, with a bit of body work like the Mustang, the relationship can sparkle once again.

At the end of the song, I just sat here in my computer chair thinking... "Yeah... that's how really good writing works." You've given me something to aim for!

All the best,
Noel


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Kenny,

Clever lyrics here—nice phrasing on the vocals that make it engaging. And a sweet chorus—love those first two lines; nice writing there. Lyrically, not sure those last two lines in the bridge work for me—if he can’t be fixed and she can’t be changed—but that’s a subjective thing; it may work just fine, so use or lose. Really strong tune, Kenny—enjoyed it!

All the best,

Deej

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Originally Posted By: Deej56
Kenny,

Clever lyrics here—nice phrasing on the vocals that make it engaging. And a sweet chorus—love those first two lines; nice writing there. Lyrically, not sure those last two lines in the bridge work for me—if he can’t be fixed and she can’t be changed—but that’s a subjective thing; it may work just fine, so use or lose. Really strong tune, Kenny—enjoyed it!

All the best,

Deej


Hey Deej,

I wanted to get right to your post because it's interesting.
Those lines in the bridge didn't sit well with you and that's fine,
I thought they were the weakest lines in the song myself but I
can tell you my train of thought when writing them.
In a country style of song every line usually relates directly to
the title, in this case Truce.
A truce is an agreement to temporarily stop fighting, I'm sure
that you know this and in a relationship even when one party
says that it's over, the other party usually has trouble letting go
or accepting the inevitable truth.
The guy in the song is realizing his worst fears, that it's too late.
He hasn't accepted that it's over.
I can't fix me means he sees that his upbringing made him
into what he understands that a man is supposed to be. (and he doesn't wanna change)
I can't change you means that he knows that she's not
happy with everything about him or their relationship.
He's in a state of mind that this will blow over, it's just a
bump in the road of life and that a truce will buy him time
for this to work out and be OK.
Boy, if I sound like a dumbass, I apologize.
I don't mean to, I'm just telling you my point of view
in writing this.

btw, thanks for your kind words and taking time to express your thoughts

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Kenny, what a great tune. The write is first rate. I think the chorus works fine. That’s the whole point of the song. Love the melody and feel. You are a master of those. The only nit I have is the vocal could be warmer without losing the grittiness. I definitely relate to your music. I would have been a good fit in your band. I also am a car guy so those opening lines resonated. Great one, Tom

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Originally Posted By: Tano Music
Hey Kenny, I liked your track! I thought the idea of song was wonderful, execution was really good, your vocal was nice and strong, all the lyrics complemented your main concept. excellent message for the times! thanks for sharing it.


Thanks for the listen and the kind words

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Originally Posted By: Joe -PG Music
Nice work on this 44kfl, This sounds fantastic and very soothing to hear. That guitar is quite warm and the pedal steel really helps piece it all together. Wonderful harmonies on the vocals. Great work!


Hey Joe,

Thank you for dropping by for a listen and for your kind words.

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Originally Posted By: Robertkc
Kenny,

What a terrific write! The segway from broken cars to hearts works so well and the result is a quintessential" guy" song.
Sung with the passion you always bring.
Another very good song!

Robert


Thank you Robert,

I am humbled by the the way that you write,

I appreciate your kind words

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Hey Kenny,

This sounds really Eagles to me as a composition but totally Kenny in
the execution.

Loved the vocals, great lyrics too. Congrats!

Ember - PG Music #502915 11/21/18 01:23 PM
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Originally Posted By: Ember - PG Music
Really great stuff. Thanks for sharing!


Thanks for dropping by for a listen and for your kind words

Scott C #502916 11/21/18 01:24 PM
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Originally Posted By: Scott C
Very cool backtrack. Loved the intro. Another super vocal and lyrics. Well done Kenny. The steel was a nice touch.


Scott,

Appreciate your listen and kind words,

your guitar playing is sounding awesome these days

44kfl #503499 11/23/18 06:49 PM
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Kenny,

Very nice and strong vocal as usual!
Your shouting singing style knocked me down.
Great production.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi

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Kenny,

This is AWESOME! One of the coolest songs I have heard from you...

Excellent vocal, mix and track selection. A great song!

Bob

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Originally Posted By: Deryk - PG Music
Really nice work on this one Kenny! As others have mentioned, the vocals are top notch here. They cut through like a dagger in the most pleasing way, and instantly demand your attention. Good lyrics to match with them as well, too. That aside, loved the progressions and though the mix was concise and professional.

You should be proud of this one - thanks for sharing smile


Thanks Deryk,

appreciate your listen and kind words

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Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
Yep, sometimes the best option is to plant that white flag!

Man, what a GREAT idea for a write. The skills to turn a wreck into a show car dwarfed by what it takes to make a relationship work. You have a fertile "song mind."

What to say? If we heard this on a current Americana playlist we'd go back to see who it was and play it again and again.

Great band, write, vocal and mix. The is deserving of a wide audience.

Stronger than a garlic milkshake!

J&B




Thanks guys!

Stronger than a garlic milkshake - another great phrase from you Bud

like fried frog hair!!! I think that was a spellcheck moment that was inspired

I appreciate both of you very much!

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Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
WOW!!! Fantastic write!! I love the angle you chose....so original and creative.....like something Jimmy Webb might think of. Music is great and so is the vocal....passionate and REAL!! I think the vocal may be a little hot on the high end. GREAT GREAT STUFF!!!! Take care. Greg


Hey Greg,

Thanks so much for your very kind words,

take care

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Originally Posted By: MarioD
Kenny, I think that this is your best to date. Your vocals, backing tracks, and mixes are always spot on but your lyrics in this song are fantastic. You can fix old cars but maybe not a relationship.

Great write!


Mario,

How are you? Thank you for the listen and kind words.

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Originally Posted By: Noel96
Kenny,

This is inspired music creating from a master-craftsman!

I love everything about this. Your writing is incredibly strong. Using the metaphor of the junkyard Mustang, you've shaped a really wonderful lyrical journey and one that vividly paints the picture of a dented relationship that's seen better days. Underlying all this, though, is the hope that, with a bit of body work like the Mustang, the relationship can sparkle once again.

At the end of the song, I just sat here in my computer chair thinking... "Yeah... that's how really good writing works." You've given me something to aim for!

All the best,
Noel



What wonderful comments/review

Thank you Noel for those very kind words

and taking the time to write this, it means a lot coming from you,

your writing is always so good and inspiring.

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Originally Posted By: tommyad
Kenny, what a great tune. The write is first rate. I think the chorus works fine. That’s the whole point of the song. Love the melody and feel. You are a master of those. The only nit I have is the vocal could be warmer without losing the grittiness. I definitely relate to your music. I would have been a good fit in your band. I also am a car guy so those opening lines resonated. Great one, Tom


Thanks Tom,

You can play in my band anytime!

and maybe I could hang in yours,

I appreciate your kind words.

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Originally Posted By: David Snyder

Hey Kenny,

This sounds really Eagles to me as a composition but totally Kenny in
the execution.

Loved the vocals, great lyrics too. Congrats!


Hey David,

Thanks for the listen and kind words.

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I like the concept contained in your lyrics... a common element to many of us guys ...good write & good delivery... I enjoyed it!


Jim
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