Excellent guitar work and a nice arrangement. The bass sounds big and full without being boom-y. The synths are nice.

A terrific listen (at low volume). A cool rock version of the song.


At loud volume (or "cranked up") as you suggest, the drum mix overpowers the rest of the instruments.
I'm all for big, loud drums (I'm sure you know that).
But it seems like you are cranking the EQ on the high end to attempt to achieve that.
The snare gets big, but the high EQ on it takes it "up out of the mix".
It is really "drawing attention to itself" - taking the ear away from the guitars and synths.
It needs some warmth to be supportive to the guitars.
The when the cymbals start in at 1:25 they REALLY take over - nearly drowning out everything else.
That happens again at 3:53.