Hi David,
Wow! You've certainly upped the song-writing ante with this creation and your arrangement and presentation of it.
As I sat here listen, these are some of the thoughts that appeared in my mind...
- completely from the heart and full of heart
- a wonderfully planned arrangement with an excellent emotional contour
- lyrics that ring with sincerity and honesty
- excellent imagery
- vocals that soar... especially the chorus
- everything about this pulls me right into the mix
You've done a great job with this!
All the best for you and your family this Christmas and New Year,
Noel