Originally Posted By: chulaivet1966
Originally Posted By: LPman
[quote=chulaivet1966][quote=Belladonna]"fleshing out " better lyrics


Although I don't write love songs or ballads I'd like to throw this out which is my approach (probably along with many others).
After choosing a subject matter I need to go there in_my_mind.
IE: if I wanted to write a song about the Grand Canyon.
I'd close my eyes and go there....maybe check a few YT videos, or look at Grand Canyon book or photos to help with the concept as I write down what I envision to create the imagery into lyrical form.
Of course....there's a tool called 'rhymezone' that can be utilized too. smile

Don't mean to hijack your initial intent here at all.

Back to topic....good luck on your song quest.


Your not hijacking my intent, I welcome your comments... I know very little about MK-Ultra... so I am breaking a rule, about writing what I don't know... Yes rhyme zone is just a cluster tool with rhyming attributes...

I am having difficulties sorting out multiple overlapping agendas... much like the "matrix"... never escaping rules of control...

Right now it seems... a smile is a form of a lethal transference... in my song.... and intent is an illusion ... and there is no escape! Ambiguity is becoming the problem.

I don't mind making this song a creative common license. I am interested mostly in making this a viable method for both music & lyrics
lyrics update

Thanks for your comments, I welcome all creative suggestions




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