Originally Posted By: floyd jane
"false alarm
faux pas or a crime
changing the world
one mistake at a time"

A clever write. The production was interesting - fitting for the subject matter. The string quartet was an excellent choice.

Scott's guitar work works well, too. Y'all need a band name!

fj


Thanks for those positives,Floyd.
Oh now I`ll stop writing songs for days thinking up names... off the top I kinda like Junkyard Angel (a line from our first collaboration).

Originally Posted By: PeterF
Robert / Scott

Catchy sound - some nice playing by Scott and a strong set of lyrics and vocals.
You've turned into quite a songwriting team.

Peter


Peter,
Thanks for your listen and comments.

Originally Posted By: Al-David
Gentlemen,

Cool retro sound! A little different - but love the direction your music has taken recently. Kudos to both of you! Merry Christmasn.

Alan


I appreciate that, Alan.
Christmas greetings to you too!

Originally Posted By: rayc
Your lyrics are really well crafted on this one. Sad truths abound.


Thanks!

Robert