I guess I'm unaffected by some the nuances of language which others mentioned...
Heck I still enjoy listening to the American group the Kingsmen... "Louie Louie"...
But I'm still uncertain of some of the words they sing smile.
Quote:
I try to stay away from pre-planned song writing, this was a semi-improvisation...
Improving suggestions are very welcomed.

You might consider participating in FAWM (February Album Writing Month - 14 songs in 28 days).
You'll have a lot of chances to "try to stay away from pre-planned song writing" wink.
https://fawm.org/


Jim
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