My two favorite lyrical parts are, "There's the bar where I will go to bleed" and "Like tincture on a tintype." The latter creates an image that complements your theme of ghost around the town. John Gorka broke the same grammar rule when he sang "There's houses in the fields." I don't have a problem with breaking the rules--"She's got a ticket to ride/and she don't care"--however, your language is elevated and more sophisticated (which is good!) than a persona who would say, "There's ghosts..."