Originally Posted By: 44kfl
gallant night (knight) love it

stretching the writing muscles !!!

a fine write, great presentation

reminds me of BJ Piano Man (great scenery, fleshed out characters)

It's like I know these guys, I've wandered into this place needing a late night caffeine fix

I can smell the grease and feel the dying dreams

feel a bond with these soldiers

enjoyed the heck out of it,

Kenny


Kenny - thanks for the great review. A comparison to Piano Man is certainly smile-producing smile smile smile (3 in fact)... I would expect you would know these guys, yes!

And I hope you are already writing a song with "the smell of grease and the feel of dying dreams"... (you are a natural).