guitar1,
the arrangement is fine and the melody too.
Your vocal performance is really good as is the capture of it.
I'm not sure throwing more chords at it would've been useful as it stands well as is. I wrote a song that touched on the same topic but from a more jaundice perspective. Only BIAB drums on my one...most of the rest was me and the co-writer Eric who played 12 string & sang....
Cannon Fodder


Cheers
rayc
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