The melody is a little more complex than usual - a bit like The Lightning Seeds.
You should give more details - I suspect you've played the 12 string at least.
With your voice that far forward in the mix you really ought to deal with plosives, esses and chs as well as the occasional errant note.
Nice song with a cool kick along backing.


Cheers
rayc
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