Kenny,
This is a wonderful musical journey.
You really grabbed hold of me with the way you described the setting sun in verse 1.
There's a cool breeze off the water
Watching a beautiful day
Slowly fading away
Sitting in a "cool breeze" and enjoying a "beautiful day" as it fades into twilight sets the scene so very well for what is to come.
You have a terrific way with words and fitting them to music. I thoroughly enjoy my listen.
All the best,
Noel