I think it sounds like a finished song and I really like it. It is a very nice chord progression and there's a good overall dynamic between your voice and the instruments.
It wouldn't have hurt if you had continued with the line "You're Looking For A World" a few times more towards the end of the song, because it is a great groove... smile

Very good job and I'm glad that you chose to share it with us.

Will

NB: You might want to fix the link to SoundCloud as it does not work correctly. Fortunately the link to SoundClick is fine!

Last edited by Will Josef; 02/03/19 12:38 PM.